谢谢Rock喜欢!

我给你的砖头上反弹一些砖头,希望你别介意。

Now I realized that (think) some fears itself is are not to be afraid of (feared), but to be endeared about, as it being a natural (good), healthy, and promoting process (feeling) once (if) you can act upon it. 

Some fears are not to be feared, but to be endeared. 我原句是想押韵的,所以不按你的建议改了,而且是要做speech的,想尽量用比较上口的句子。后面的我就也不改成分词了,保持两个句子。 endear本身是及物动词,不需要about。

Being working remotely at home, I felt extra vulnerable to the laid-off list. 这是个病句,being应该去掉。

Fear of death, fear of failure and fear of public speaking were the most intrigued me as they are more on the psychological side. 这个句子也是错的。


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