It is an excellent article!

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回答: 请高手修改一篇800字数的essay,下周交.dlhy2011-10-22 21:22:07

Canada attracts thousands of immigrants, who come from all over the world.

>>> Canada attracts dozens of thousands of immigrants from all over the world.

newcomers’ native language are not English

>>> newcomers’ native language is not English

If newcomers can not overcome the critical communication barrier,

>>> If newcomers cannot overcome the critical communication barrier,

face many difficult situations.

>>> face many difficulties.

learning it becomes their primary goal.

>>> English learning becomes their primary goal.

Several ways of improving listening skills include:

>>> Ways of improving listening skills include:

listening to news from TV, radio;

>>> listening to news on TV, radio;

English speaker might find the spoken words difficult to comprehend.

>>> Native English speakers might find the spoken words difficult to comprehend.

At same time,

>>> At the same time,

The choice of reading materials is much multiple.

>>> The choice of reading materials is variously available.

Making notes is a very useful method

>>> Taking notes is a very useful method

bring pens and paper

>>> bring a pen and a notebook

keep tireless efforts,

>>> make tireless efforts,

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Great corrections! I learned a lot! -beautifulwind- 给 beautifulwind 发送悄悄话 beautifulwind 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 10/23/2011 postreply 14:55:10

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"editing", not "edittings" :) -1231- 给 1231 发送悄悄话 1231 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 10/23/2011 postreply 17:50:11

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