Even though New York city is the home of many broadway artists and movie stars, an internet celebrity of China chose to stay away from the bustling area of New York to live in a nail salon in Brooklyn to avoid (the) public scrutiny back in China.
home 虽然也通,但圣地没有翻出来.
an internet celebrity of China -> a Chinese internet celebrity 好些
chose -> has chosen
总体比较通顺,至少读起来不费劲.
