oh, 没问题,发现自己好几颗砖

本帖于 2011-09-27 04:20:16 时间, 由版主 林贝卡 编辑
回答: 又改正了点,重发了jennea2011-09-26 19:42:16

who do you identify with-->who you identify with

he identify with an american painter->identifies

前面far complicated than-> far more complicated than.

I shouldn't say "just" because he  wants to "penetrate ... and rise...", I mean, I wouldn't say ...

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