Some 砖头

来源: 非文学青年于 2011-09-07 21:09:20 [档案] [博客] [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 本文已被阅读：次 (1476 bytes)

回答: [写作练习］My American Dream 由 jennea 于 2011-09-07 18:36:56

第一和第二段的时态比较乱。这篇文章的结构有点不太清楚，比较象random thoughts，呵呵。

I still think that way to some extend->extent

work together to deceit people->deceive

momentary?->monetary?

This question is completely beyond my comprehension. weird，should be the phenomenon/the fact is beyond my comprehension?

US->the US

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• 嗯，我写东西基本都是random thoughts -jennea- ♀ (127 bytes) () 09/07/2011 postreply 21:46:45

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