按你说的，改了改，现在怎么样？

Once again, China started a war of words against Vatican, which stated Vatican’s criticism on the congregation of Catholic, supported by Chinese government, was not wise and baseless.

下划线的是从句修饰修饰war

was 是从句里的宾语从句里的谓语

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• 你还挺会改的，这次我找不出毛病了。 -beautifulwind- ♀ (88 bytes) () 08/31/2011 postreply 17:03:23

• 偷了大家的翻译，再改一下 -金迷- ♂ (347 bytes) () 08/31/2011 postreply 17:18:31

• 这么改完之后，supported by Chinese government就看不清是修饰谁了。 -beautifulwind- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/31/2011 postreply 17:22:47

• 是啊，有点象是修饰meeting的了，呵呵 -金迷- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/31/2011 postreply 17:31:36

• 回复：按你说的，改了改，现在怎么样？ -EnLearner- ♀ (618 bytes) () 08/31/2011 postreply 19:16:48

• 用现在分词，这句子就漂亮多了，谢谢渔教授 -金迷- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/31/2011 postreply 19:54:56