这些家伙们肯定是嫉妒你背诵得好，给了你不少砖头。哈哈。我的小砖头和一点写作的建议

I like reading Chinese novels since I was in elementary schools. -->I have liked reading Chinese novels since elementary school.

even on(at) dinner tables with my parents scolding me--> “despite my parents’ scolding” seems better.

 I was trained to grasp the “truth” out of the “details”, keeping only the “truth” and discarding the “details”, believing that I could deducte the details later myself. Keeping and discarding   是不是要换成 to keep，to discard? not totally sure.

I blamed this mainly for lacking (the lack )of vocabularies(y?). Everyone has vocabulary, 不能说lack of vocabulary，换成：my small vocabulary，my limited vocabulary， maybe?

bother others with my own tiny little small world—>tiny little small? All three of them together?   

But hey, after reading Eat Pray Love, I regained my confidence. -->have regained

imagining traveling across the world-->across the country, but around the world.

我觉得写得很好是因为flow很好，明显觉得写的时候是用英文思考。一点建议就是应该讲一讲Why were your frustrated about writing? Why do you want to work on it? for professional purpose, as a hobby, or just want to have this skill set? Give some examples in your life, some anecdotes will flesh it out.

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• I made a lot of stupid mistakes -jennea- ♀ (603 bytes) () 08/28/2011 postreply 23:04:23

• 更新了， 大谢！ -jennea- ♀ (93 bytes) () 08/28/2011 postreply 23:20:29

• 恩，这个我也觉得不好改。 -非文学青年- ♀ (101 bytes) () 08/28/2011 postreply 23:36:04