My 2 cents

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回答: Frustration about Writing 由 jennea 于 2011-08-28 11:52:54

3rd paragraph:

1. I already pass that golden age --> I am already beyond the golden age or I have already passed the golden age

2. I am not into other people’s stories that much as I was young -->  I am not into other people’s stories that much as when I was young

4th paragraph:

1.  tendency is considered as --> tendency is considered

 2.  the big picture about more importance aspects of life-->the big picture about more important aspects of life

3. like future of the world -->like the future of the world, etc

6th paragraph:

1. in a sunny Sunday morning-->on a sunny Sunday morning

2. every minor details-->every details


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• 谢！！都收到。 in the morning 还是 on the morning 有点糊涂 -jennea- ♀ 给 jennea 发送悄悄话 jennea 的博客首页 (26 bytes) () 08/28/2011 postreply 14:51:26

• 回复：谢！！都收到。 in the morning 还是 on the morning 有点糊涂 -jingbeiboy- ♂ 给 jingbeiboy 发送悄悄话 (152 bytes) () 08/28/2011 postreply 15:00:41

• 哦，原来是这样！谢谢jingbei！ -jennea- ♀ 给 jennea 发送悄悄话 jennea 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/28/2011 postreply 15:05:43

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