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回答: 翻译--------欢迎改错和润色,谢谢!i9992011-08-15 17:07:51

The emerging (emergence) of modern science could be traced back to the era of Roger Bacon, who was an outstanding monk and philosopher in Oxford. He was born in 1214 and died in 1292. With many extraordinary findings by himself, he might be the first in the Middle Ages to bring up the thought that science must be explored through observing and experimenting on the surroundings. Galileo, however, born more than 300 years later, was the greatest among several great persons in Italy, France, Germany and England, who convinced the public in steps  (please see my explanation below) that many important truths could be discovered via appropriate observations.  Before Galileothe scholars believed without any doubt that larger objects fell to the ground at a faster rate than the smaller ones just because Aristotle said so. However, from the top of the Leaning Tower of Pisa, Galilleo dropped two stones of distinctively different sizes which  (that) landed on the ground at exactly the same time, and thereby, testified that Aristotle was wrong, to his friends who witnessed this experiment. It is Galileo’s spirit of experimenting (conducting experiments) directly in nature to verify our judgments and theories that has brought the modern science to fruition in all great discoveries.

 

- Emerging 在这用得不太合适,Emerging 指正在兴起的东西,比如:emerging technology, emerging role of

 

- In steps, 知道你想说逐步的,但好像没这种用法。In step: 同步的意思。 We marched in step to the music.

  

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这句翻得不大对: that has brought the modern science to fruition in all great discoveries.

 

 

 

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