第一次让他帮着看了看我翻译的，发现毛病还真多。我前两天刚刚翘起的尾巴又赶快收起来了。哈哈
What etiquette is to a society is like clothes to an individual. An individual without clothes would be ridiculed for being naked and （would）cause deterioration of morals. Without etiquette, a society would be in a mess （不正式）and the necessary interaction between members of the society would be disrupted by meaningless conflicts and turmoil. If the society were a train, then etiquette would be like the rail along which can the train march（train不跟march）. If the society were a carriage, etiquette would be like the wheels and axles, only with which can the carriage go forward. Without etiquette, the closest friends would become enemies and allies or unions of countries would fight with each other（他说加个often或者frequently好些）. We can find many examples like this in the human history. Therefore, I suggest you to obey the etiquette （use/follow etiquette）when dealing with anyone（everyone）, and try not to do things against （without）it, in avoidance of（in order to avoid好一些） offending others or making enemies.
