久违了, 同学小薇. (sorry, the font was too small to see in the earlier

来源: NewVoice 于 2011-07-18 17:16:24 [] [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 阅读数 : (912 bytes)
回答: 交翻译作业 由 同学小薇 于 2011-07-18 16:08:26

Just a few suggestions, but I could be wrong.

1. No man-made precious gems and metals are - none of the man-made ...

2.  such as light, agility, flexibility, elegance - such as its lightness, agility ...

3. The green, red and yellow colored feathers shine as hummingbirds always live in the sky without touching the dust and grass. - this sentence should be broken into two sentences, because there is no causal relationship between the first and second part of the sentence. 

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