你这是创作不是模仿。看我给你来个真模仿：

诗太难，模仿段独白。

I don't like having a rigid schedule. After very much consideration, I have finally changed my basic weekly plan. I still vacuum rooms on Mondays, teach little Caila Chinese on Tuesdays,  pay the bills on Wednesdays, and do my my laundries on Thursdays. However, my Friday nights must be reserved for me to enjoy music, browse or surf the Internet,  or just relax.  Music?  Yes, New and old,  pop or classical...which I know well  or I don’t know at all .  Then I  run errands and go shopping on  my Saturdays.  Afterwards, I  stay at home all Sunday, sleeping， eating， daydreaming， reading ShakespeareBears, or just loitering my time away, and rewarding myself on the completion of another successful week.

模仿desperate housewives里的一段经典独白 ( took me 12mins to complete)

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原文：
This is how Bree Van De Kamp finally came to change her weekly routine, she still cleaned on Tuesdays, paid her bills on Wednesdays, and did her laundries on Thursdays, but her Fridays were now reserved for a meeting, a special meeting where she stood in front of people she didn’t know, and said things she didn’t believe, and afterwards Bree would come home and reward herself on the completion of another successful week.

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• let me re-post:). beautifully done -havenot- ♀ (196 bytes) () 07/15/2011 postreply 14:22:10

• re-post? haha -tern2- ♀ (51 bytes) () 07/15/2011 postreply 19:22:43

• 还好 -havenot- ♀ (16 bytes) () 07/15/2011 postreply 21:22:46

• sorry for all the touble：）） -亦冬- ♀ (136 bytes) () 07/15/2011 postreply 20:15:58

• 看出来 -havenot- ♀ (101 bytes) () 07/15/2011 postreply 21:31:48

• 你是马夹？都是有才人啊 -金迷- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/15/2011 postreply 16:09:59

• 特过来跟金侠学英语呢。 -亦冬- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/15/2011 postreply 19:57:22

• 你教我还差不多 -金迷- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/15/2011 postreply 21:27:12