my dictation homework, based on BW's

The first snow came. How beautiful it was! Falling so silently all day long all night long on the mountains, on the meadows, on the roofs of the living, on the graves of the dead. All white,  saved the river that marked its course by a winding black lines across the landscape. And the leafless trees that against the leaden sky now reviewed more flee fully the wonderful beauty and the intregacy intricacy of their branches. What silent silence too came with the snow and what was the conclusion, every sound was muffled, every voice noice changed to something soft and musical, no more traveling tramping huffs horses?（查了字典知道是hoofs）, no more raveling rattling wheels, only the charming of the sleigh bells beating as swift and merrily as hearts of children.

所有跟帖： 

• lmao，大牛！Thanks! -beautifulwind- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/11/2011 postreply 23:01:55

• 不知道对不对，瞎改，上次就有一处给NewVoice改错了。 -lmao- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/11/2011 postreply 23:03:16

• 上次看了你的听写，又对照了原文，你的听力也太牛了。估计老美都听不了你这么清楚。 -beautifulwind- ♀ (58 bytes) () 07/11/2011 postreply 23:05:51

• oh, reviewed-->revealed -lmao- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/11/2011 postreply 23:15:20

• 嗯，看了愚公的听力作业后意识到了。 -beautifulwind- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/11/2011 postreply 23:18:00

• conclusion->seclusion. -lmao- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/12/2011 postreply 09:26:08

• 这才是精益求精啊。 -EnLearner- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/12/2011 postreply 20:05:52

• 当时就觉得这个词听得不对。可又不知道该是啥。怎一个“牛”字了得！ -beautifulwind- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/12/2011 postreply 21:46:59