Usualy a foul night is not what I am fond of. The heavy rain w

Usualy  a foul night is not what I am  fond of. The heavy rain with high wind in a summer night makes me feel bad, adding an element of loneliness, creepiness, and isolation.

 But the rain and wind  under your writing is a fascinating exception.   The vivid description of  a series of movements and sounds performed by the nature is a masterpiece, creating a wonderful image of a lively rain and fall. This is the piece that will top all your other poems. do you think i am  exagerating??? :)))


你这篇写的很棒！非常巧妙的把一副生动形象的风雨画面呈现在我们面前。这些词汇选的很妙，很有韵味，既增加了音韵美，又非常形象连贯，读起来节奏感很强， 很有美感。。。

最后又动到静的转换， 由物到人的转换，意境上得到了升华。

it is another masterpiece.

所有跟帖： 

• you write very well. -veryfar- ♀ (422 bytes) () 07/06/2011 postreply 15:22:31

• Wind and rain raging outside -tern2- ♀ (159 bytes) () 07/06/2011 postreply 21:29:49

• 你真是大高手 -veryfar- ♀ (183 bytes) () 07/06/2011 postreply 21:33:32

• 我来翻 -follower- ♀ (131 bytes) () 07/06/2011 postreply 22:33:39

• 高翻啊高翻！ -tern2- ♀ (348 bytes) () 07/07/2011 postreply 06:07:22

• 是你的诗写的妙 -follower- ♀ (17 bytes) () 07/07/2011 postreply 06:56:26