Would it be OK if I point out some parts that needs a bit polishing?
金帝,excellent writing.
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please, I appreciate that if you do
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金帝, here you go
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07/01/2011 postreply
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Thank you, youth
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Old habits die hard, haha…
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you guys are hilarious
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