谢谢大家参与，这个挺好玩的，以后多弄弄。还是我师兄厉害。
其实这三处（marked in green）应该说是错误，不是不地道的地方。不地道的地方细究起来还会有很多。
use-->usage好一些，这个use用得算是不太地道的地方，checked with LG，他说他会说the use of the word “xx"。
tern2提出的对It's just pure, wrong usage of "bitter"!中的comma的质疑，其实我这逗号是写完读的时候加上的，为了加重语气，这个是个personal preference，在speech中更常见一点儿。
我要强那个分数吗？that's just a joke! It's just a random number for entertainment purposeS only. Do you think I took it seriously? No, of course not. I know where my English level stands and I feel secure enough to laugh at the score. And I have a highly-educated native speaker at home to check （with/my writing）.
I was only annoyed that most of the comments were so wrong and everyone is buying it! For example, your use of "bitter" is not British English. It's just pure, wrong usage of "bitter"! it would be such an insult to the Brits! However, your grammatical mistake of using "many" in front of an uncountable noun, your wrong use of "promise to somebody" and your mistake in "I should have had spent " were not pointed out. But I don't want to argue about it because that will take too much time. I don't want to be sucked into another online fight.
I feel the translation/writing class is becoming too much of a distraction for me, overshadowing my pronounciation efforts. That's why I need to shift my focus and "闭关". :)
