我的作业

It was really bitter that so many bad news came out in one morning. But I knew Bill and I had to keep our life going. Workers in XIYI were walking around in bewilderment, whispering on their cell phones, and talking in secret with their offices’ door shut. We promised to people in the White House that we would handle this crisis well, and were preparing to fight back like before, which was important. I knew all of them would do things as I did. For me and people around, the advantageous way was to steer a steady course. I should have had spent more time for my first-time showing up, but I had not. Invited by our old friend Taylor, I was going to give a talk about people’s right that afternoon in the college of GUCHE as planned.  For I did not want to disappoint the college and Taylor- whose wife was working for me, I went to the Union train Station, and took the train to Baltimore,

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• 我给94分。很好！有前途！但要多应用美式表达方式。Bitter?英国啊。 -DrunkerKickass- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/20/2011 postreply 21:38:42

• 还有打分的？不知道bitter是英式表达，学习了。 -cutestream- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/21/2011 postreply 06:23:09