cicila，你看这个有没有点象rap

Love at first sight

coming back from work
i checked my dell
someone sent me a picture
calling herself belle

at the first glance
in love i fell
i emailed back for a date
she replied 'see you near the motel'

on the way there
i dreamed of a girl so swell
thinking of showing her off
in front of my ex michelle

as soon as we met
i wanted to bid her farewell
she wasn't pretty
and spoke with a smell

'was the picture yours?'
'beauty is only a shell'
i asked the question again
this time 'yes if you removed many a cell'

'did you do math like 7+ 8?'
'sure, it is 12, i can tell'
'is water H2O?'
'wader? WADER, see, i can spell'

i quickly left wishing her well
and went back to where i dwell
the whole night i murmured to myself
'what the hell, what the hell'

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• cicila，这是我三年前写的。现在看来感到 -veryfar- ♀ (63 bytes) () 06/08/2011 postreply 07:38:32

• 有韵律的诗最好听。 -cicila- ♀ (94 bytes) () 06/08/2011 postreply 09:32:20

• 是的。周末在电视看les miserables 25th anniversary -veryfar- ♀ (107 bytes) () 06/08/2011 postreply 10:39:59

• 一般来讲，写幽默的诗有押韵会更好些 -veryfar- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/08/2011 postreply 11:00:28

• 三年前写的吗？ -cicila- ♀ (375 bytes) () 06/08/2011 postreply 08:24:08

• 我看了后也是这样想的 -hahaman- ♀ (56 bytes) () 06/08/2011 postreply 08:31:58

• wader? WADER, see, i can spell，太乐了！这象最近写的，呵呵。 -非文学青年- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/08/2011 postreply 08:34:20

• 到有点巧合，哈哈 -hahaman- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/08/2011 postreply 08:50:18

• 嗯，高度可疑：））） -cicila- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/08/2011 postreply 08:57:06

• 你读的还真细，哈哈。我是稍微改了点儿。原文： -veryfar- ♀ (58 bytes) () 06/08/2011 postreply 10:46:58

• 没有，瞎猫碰到死老鼠了。是巧合。 -非文学青年- ♀ (40 bytes) () 06/08/2011 postreply 10:57:05

• 广东人有句话，盲拳打死老师傅，是一样的意思。呵呵。 -bingli- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/08/2011 postreply 12:57:47

• 才思敏捷，谢谢分享。 -珈玥- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/08/2011 postreply 14:01:23