Gaze

Gaze

Gaze into your eyes
and feel a warmth I cannot name—
not fire, not light
but something trembling in between
a quiet fever without a claim

Soft as the hour before the sun
when night still clings to the sky in blue
yet burning beneath my skin
a hidden, lucid, cobalt hue

Your breath breezes against my face
a hush that stirs the dark to bloom
I’m lost in your tender grace
In your dreamy shades and perfume

A sultry fragrance, slow and deep
unfurls like wine left out in air
I drink it through my lips
and find yours lingering there

Then on my tongue—a minty trace
Cool as the first morning dew
Twilight veils your flushed face
as if the dawn itself were you




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A very well-written love poem! -暖冬cool夏- 给 暖冬cool夏 发送悄悄话 暖冬cool夏 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 04/20/2026 postreply 00:25:07

+1. The world needs love&peace, not handbags nor wars. Amen! -最西边的岛上- 给 最西边的岛上 发送悄悄话 最西边的岛上 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 04/20/2026 postreply 05:15:25

thank you both for the kind complements -zhouqichan- 给 zhouqichan 发送悄悄话 zhouqichan 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 04/20/2026 postreply 12:56:02

Welcome to MYSJ & pls feel free 2 join discussions here. Thx -最西边的岛上- 给 最西边的岛上 发送悄悄话 最西边的岛上 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 04/20/2026 postreply 05:19:28

thx, sure I will -zhouqichan- 给 zhouqichan 发送悄悄话 zhouqichan 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 04/20/2026 postreply 12:56:10

Your poem feels like a quiet romance, soft, a little dreamy~ -JoyAnna.- 给 JoyAnna. 发送悄悄话 JoyAnna. 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 04/20/2026 postreply 05:28:36

thanks for your kind words, a dream I wish would last 4ever -zhouqichan- 给 zhouqichan 发送悄悄话 zhouqichan 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 04/20/2026 postreply 12:58:05

Thought I saw Gaza -移花接木- 给 移花接木 发送悄悄话 移花接木 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 04/20/2026 postreply 13:30:54

too romantic for poetry -忒忒绿- 给 忒忒绿 发送悄悄话 忒忒绿 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 04/22/2026 postreply 13:36:00

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