今天commute想到一首歪诗: 仿写十四行诗How Do I Love Thee

 

To Traffic by 文青：

How do I hate thee? Let me count the ways.

I hate thee to the depth and breadth and height

My car can screech, when a stop is in sight

For the freeway speed leaves me no Grace.

I hate thee to the level of everyday's

Most noisy deed, by men and traffic-light.

I hate thee greatly, as I like turning Right;

I hate thee purely, as my premium they Raise.

I hate thee with the passion put to use

In my beliefs, that I be at work at hour eighth.

I hate thee with a hate I seemed to abuse

With my complaints,—I hate thee with the breath,

Smiles, tears, of all my life!—and, if God choose,

I shall but hate thee even if I drove a Benz. 

Original：

How do I love thee? Let me count the ways.

I love thee to the depth and breadth and height

My soul can reach, when feeling out of sight

For the ends of Being and ideal Grace.

I love thee to the level of every day’s

Most quiet need, by sun and candlelight.

I love thee freely, as men strive for Right;

I love thee purely, as they turn from Praise.

I love with a passion put to use

In my old griefs, and with my childhood’s faith.

I love thee with a love I seemed to lose

With my lost saints, I love thee with the breath,

Smiles, tears, of all my life! and, if God choose,

I shall but love thee better after death.

所有跟帖： 

• 文青大牛！赞赞赞！！！ -beautifulwind- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/24/2012 postreply 11:44:02

• CO：文青大牛！赞赞赞！！！ -doyouknowme- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/24/2012 postreply 11:47:50

• 哈哈，读读吧？有hate，可以练ei音。瞎玩儿的建议，不必当真。 -非文学青年- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/24/2012 postreply 11:47:58

• 文青，还是你读吧。我来练练我的挑毛病能力。：） -beautifulwind- ♀ (51 bytes) () 09/24/2012 postreply 13:50:13

• Clap clap clap! -Rockcurrent- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/24/2012 postreply 12:44:15

• 文青开始写诗了-鼓励一把！ -yingyudidida- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/24/2012 postreply 19:46:39

• 谢谢RC和Bill鼓励，瞎写着玩，找乐子。晚安！ -非文学青年- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/24/2012 postreply 20:34:02

• 听起来仇恨一点儿都不可怕嘛！：-） -北京二号- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/24/2012 postreply 21:25:35

• 为了凑韵，仇恨表达不够强烈，呵呵。 -非文学青年- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/25/2012 postreply 13:37:22