《泛舟》 On a Boat

夕陽泛金波﹐ The setting sun reflects on the golden waves
細浪逐輕舟。The ripples follow in the wake of the light boat
夾水桃間柳﹐ Peach trees intervene among the willows at the lakeside
湖心鶩雙浮。On the center of which float a pair of ducks
水濱一蒼首﹐ At the waterside there’s a grey-headed man
垂綸意自悠。Angling in a manner of leisure
花間數童兒﹐ Some children among flowers
撲蝶鬧嘲啁。Catching butterflies in boisterous laughter
孤雲宿峰際﹐ A lone piece of cloud lodging at the peak
白鷺戀芳洲。The egret lingering on the fragrant shoal
絲長鶯囀婉﹐ The oriole warbling among the long drooping twigs
風微香散幽。The gentle breeze spreading the faint aroma
舷楫相親吻﹐ The oar and the gunwale kiss each other
力疲任自流。When tired, I let the boat float with the water
枻鼓搖倒影﹐ The move of the oar rocks the inverted image in water
影動驚潛鷗。And the rocking image startles the diving gull
時暮竟忘返﹐ Though it’s already dusk, I forget to return
未歸思復遊。I think of revisiting even if not go back yet

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• 回复：《泛舟》 On a Boat -李唐- ♂ (30 bytes) () 10/26/2008 postreply 18:41:28

• 當然不是格律體。只是五言押個韻而已。thanks for reading -海外逸士- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/27/2008 postreply 06:43:43

• 是啊，格律体的平仄很容易使一个好的意境写不成律诗。 -李唐- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/27/2008 postreply 07:00:44

• 所以詩體很多﹐不喜歡受格律束縛的﹐可選沒格律的體。 -海外逸士- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/27/2008 postreply 16:36:56

• 喜欢！ -楚江- ♀ (224 bytes) () 10/26/2008 postreply 21:26:15

• 家學淵源或有之。只是來自滬上。問大家好。 -海外逸士- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/27/2008 postreply 06:46:15

• 先生真正是生在新中国,长在红旗下的一代, -楚江- ♀ (43 bytes) () 10/27/2008 postreply 07:41:08

• 別客氣。生于1937年。49年時12歲﹐已打下一定根基。後來就只能靠自己了。 -海外逸士- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/27/2008 postreply 16:39:46

• 先生跟我父亲差不多的年纪， -楚江- ♀ (200 bytes) () 10/27/2008 postreply 22:20:32

• 回复：《泛舟》 On a Boat -宋德利利- ♂ (317 bytes) () 10/26/2008 postreply 22:06:30

• thanks -海外逸士- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/27/2008 postreply 06:47:18

• 回复：《泛舟》 On a Boat -武都水坝- ♀ (130 bytes) () 10/28/2008 postreply 16:25:42

• 回复：《泛舟》 On a Boat -武都水坝- ♀ (130 bytes) () 10/28/2008 postreply 16:29:46