一语,
哪里,哪里。如果我不谦虚地话,我只接受你前面两句的评语:朗朗上口,节奏轻快。因为我每写完一句都要好好念念,写完整篇,更是反复推敲,因此念起来大部分是可以上口的。节奏嘛,一般都是轻快的,因为我的诗绝大多数都是以欢快心情写的,而且极少写长诗长句。至于“情深色昂而文采扬”,只做为今后努力方向吧。你看,这么一来,倒真地激发起我谈论写诗的兴致了,等着吧,我还会写一些,供讨论。
宋德利
• (复君宋德利)写诗三采, This is just what I felt in reading it -一语湖边_lakeshore- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/08/2008 postreply 05:28:41
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