【加队】试翻一打油Limerick
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• Nice ... -Lucidus- ♂ (29 bytes) () 02/08/2013 postreply 21:17:34
• 多谢指正。已做了更正改动。 -淘金客- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/09/2013 postreply 04:19:13
• Good! Does this flue refer to chimney? -聚曦亭- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/08/2013 postreply 21:53:56
• 多谢指正。没错,flue是烟囱里面的烟管或烟道,觉得这也太大太容易逃掉,做了改动。银应写作烟. -淘金客- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/09/2013 postreply 03:49:45
• Ding! -beautifulwind- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/08/2013 postreply 22:42:19
• 再看看改进版和说明?:)) -淘金客- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/09/2013 postreply 04:21:40
• 回复::))不知道烟囱里的烟管是什么样的?恭喜发财!万事如意!:) -淘金客- ♂ (45 bytes) () 02/09/2013 postreply 06:48:32
• 回复:An Interesting limerick!Thank you for the new version! They r -淘金客- ♂ (46 bytes) () 02/09/2013 postreply 06:54:03
• 鼓掌!过年好! -rockcurrent- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/09/2013 postreply 21:22:34
• 谢了。新春快乐! -淘金客- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/10/2013 postreply 09:10:00