【加队】试翻一打油Limerick

来源: 2013-02-08 20:08:26 [博客] [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 本文已被阅读:

 

A flea and a fly in a flue,
Were trapped and knew not what to do,
Said the fly , 'Let us flee'
'Let us fly', said the flea,
So they flew through a flaw in the flue.

飞蝇跳蚤哦掉烟笛
愁脸对看啊苦希希
飞蝇催,“快,咱跳”
“不,咱飞”, 跳蚤叫
亏有一孔兄弟终逃离

第一句也可改作“飞蝇跳蚤哦烟道迷”,谢坛友们指正。limerick字义浅显,觉得没必要意译。这里我用一个汉字对应一个音节来译,想尽量翻出里面的节奏和趣味。