莎士比亚《Venus and Adonis》翻译 - 011

Forced to content, but never to obey,

Panting he lies and breatheth in her face;

She feedeth on the steam as on a prey,

And calls it heavenly moisture, air of grace;

Wishing her cheeks were gardens full of flowers,

So they were dew'd with such distilling showers.

曲意迎合心不拢，

少年仰嘘神女面；

妖女采气戏男宠，

单言神雾甘且甜；

奴愿双腮变花圃，

日开夜放承君露。

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• bmdn真有才华,我一直在跟读你的翻译系列,既学英语又学中文。 -紫君- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/05/2012 postreply 13:17:57

• 多谢表扬和鼓励。 -bmdn- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/06/2012 postreply 08:04:52

• bmdn的确厉害。没有译文直接看原文我会感到吃力。 -onceuponatime- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/05/2012 postreply 18:54:50

• 太感谢了！ -bmdn- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/06/2012 postreply 08:05:38

• 出师一表真名世 千载谁堪伯仲间. 崇拜！ -sportwoman- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/06/2012 postreply 08:07:27

• 如果是说我的话，不敢承受。高人有的是。 -bmdn- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/06/2012 postreply 08:38:07