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The organizer worried to have the same issues as the 1996 Olympic game in Atlanta, which is so-called " an unsatisfied Olympic game" due to its unorgnaized transportation system that resulted most of athletics missed their scheduled competition.

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• 回复：my try -浮上来冒个小泡- ♀ (42 bytes) () 09/28/2011 postreply 18:36:45

• 记得jennea的老师专门教过她应该尽量用逗号，这样读者读起来不累。 -beautifulwind- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/28/2011 postreply 18:52:39

• 不是说用逗号不好,而是指在今天的翻译中,用一个逗号表达 -浮上来冒个小泡- ♀ (689 bytes) () 09/28/2011 postreply 19:10:33

• 有道理，看jennea和别的同学怎么说吧。 -beautifulwind- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/28/2011 postreply 19:13:09

• comma usage: -jennea- ♀ (339 bytes) () 09/28/2011 postreply 20:02:11

• 谢谢jennea！ -beautifulwind- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/28/2011 postreply 22:00:35