回报阅读砖

这周你连着上班很累吧，翻得很敷衍了事啊。

I would address it again to cultivate the hobby of reading good books in your spare time.

Address用法和ask, tell不一样。如果 I would ask you to …这个句子就行了。

Those people who try to make themselves to be real readers are really lucky because reading books do them a lot of good. They have  never felt （would never feel） lonely as long as books in their hands.

As long as后面要接完整句子不能只接名词。

   The better the books are, the more interesting the reading is. They not only enjoy  reading good books, but also benefit from books.  The spirit acquired from books is hard to get from anywhere else.  Their working efficiency is enhanced by reading books while a break,

这句没救了。While后面也要加句子或者分词while taking a break（如果是分词的话得把句子主语换成they—take a break的人）。

 although they may not realize that reading is to enhance （can/will enhance比较好） wisdom. The knowledge gained from books accumulates together unawarely,

又一句没救的。自创词unawarely, maybe change to “without their awareness”?。

 processing with imagination, that will benefit （them）a lot in the future.

美风要特别注意分词的主语是谁，来决定是现在分词ing还是过去分词ed。

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• 大谢lmao教授！！！不行，我确实得恶补一下语法了。 -beautifulwind- ♀ (103 bytes) () 07/26/2011 postreply 18:46:05

• 把砖头都挑走了。难道就你一人需要报仇吗？ -EnLearner- ♀ (842 bytes) () 07/27/2011 postreply 19:04:50

• 恭喜愚教授挑砖水平已超过猪脚了！很好！ -非文学青年- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/27/2011 postreply 21:03:53

• 谢谢文愚教授！收获很大。我现在开始补语法。 -beautifulwind- ♀ (85 bytes) () 07/27/2011 postreply 21:50:52