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Maple leaves on the wall

In the spring, you bid farewell to me for the north,
for the snow that has not melted.
Leave me facing the silent wall,
where you painted flaming maple leaves
clinging to the twigs in the autumn wind.
You adjure me constantly-
Come to me,
when the maple leaves fall and cover your palms.

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xxx - Well done!

Enjoyed it!

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xxx - Thanks for your kind words, love your colorful ID picture.

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x x x - Very nice job please read Autumn wind, which related and you may like it

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xxx - Thanks for your kind comments and recommendation of Autumn wind. I will read it, for sure.

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xxx - Carefully constructed descriptions that create an emotional impact.

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xxx - I really appreciate your kind comments, so glad you feel the emotion in my poem.

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xxx - I am into the spring and words you draw so vividly and strongly.

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xxx - Thanks for your kind words, and enjoy the spring!

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x x x - This sounds like where I live..evoked personal familiar..nice write

Great

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x x x - x x x - so glad my resonates with you! Thanks for your kind words!

 

Blueautumn88 - Welcome

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xxx- Fave line is Leave me...overall strongly written.

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xxx - Thanks! We face walls, and we tear down walls.

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xxx - I really loved reading this one and also loved the atmosphere it conveys!

Thanks for sharing!

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xxx- Thank you so much! So glad you like the atmosphere in the poem.

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xxx- A very contemplative piece of work. Keep writing more.

Lovely.

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xxx - I really appreciate your encouraging words!

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• 有点意思了。 -HAPPY-DAY- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/16/2019 postreply 12:46:11

• 有诗意 -Giantfan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/16/2019 postreply 12:54:38

• 回报一下，有中文原文吗？ -xiangbuming- ♂ (965 bytes) () 07/16/2019 postreply 13:05:23

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