这样改一下不知道可不可以：）

He wanted to go for a spring outing alone, taking a backpack, a camera, and some snackes and hiking in the wilderness all through the day, to look for the footprints of spring in the expanse of the countryside. 

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• 谢虫！更简洁明快了。是不是还是用to hike ... and to look for 来表达outing的目的 -忒忒绿- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/26/2021 postreply 21:46:00

• 羊羊呢？ -忒忒绿- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/26/2021 postreply 21:50:00

• I am sticking around, sir. -LYJiang- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/27/2021 postreply 07:06:24

• 觉得主要行为是have an outing and look for the footsteps of Spring. 其他是辅 -甜虫虫- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/26/2021 postreply 21:52:24

• 喜欢这种交流切磋的气氛。 -天边一片白云- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/27/2021 postreply 06:40:13

• ;)又有娱乐、又有深入、又有浅出，相互学习，共同进步，很哇噻的气氛！ -忒忒绿- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/27/2021 postreply 08:52:00

• 我现在回头再看你的译文，明白多了。 -天边一片白云- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/27/2021 postreply 11:31:24