试译“Let me give you my vision: ...”

为英坛写了一篇“撒切尔夫人与“欧洲病夫” 用她的 “Let me give you my vision: ...” 结尾。

我的翻译如下，请高手们斧正。

Let me give you my vision: A man's right to work as he will, to spend what he earns, to own property, to have the State as servant and not as master -- these are the British inheritance. They are the essence of a free economy. And on that freedom all our other freedoms depend.

“让我给你我的愿景：一个人有按他意愿去工作的权利、有花自己钱的权利、有拥有财产的权利、有使国家成为仆人而不是主人的权利 -- 这是英国的遗产、也是自由经济的精髓。所有其它自由建立在经济自由这一基础之上。”

所有跟帖： 

• Nice! Thanks! -wave_forest- ♂ (411 bytes) () 04/17/2013 postreply 14:40:01

• how about “这是我给你的愿景：”？ -qunide- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/24/2013 postreply 12:53:02