回复：my try

Although New York is a saint city for American stage and movie stars, the Chinese popular network star decided to work in a nail salon in Brooklyn that outside of New York downtown area in order to avoid the public critics from China.

saint city -> 可考虑换别的词.

network -> internet

decided -> has decided

that outside ->没有谓语

critics -> criticism

 

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• Appreciated your help as always! Enjoy the weekend! -etcacct- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/30/2011 postreply 18:58:32