好久不见，大家好-贴一个ESL老师给我改过的作业--写明信片。

Dear Mai,

Hello from i999 in Munich. It is my third visit to Munich and won’t be my last time.

When I stroll on the stone-paved roads built by the Romans and look at the historic buildings, the great history of Germany fills my mind. I felt very close to the great musicians, philosophers, writers, artists and architects in German history. I will go to the new swan castle which is the prototype of the castles in Disneyland tomorrow.

 

Keep in touch!

 

有了老师的好处是不愁砖了。

所有跟帖： 

• 问好，谢分享。 -紫君- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/13/2011 postreply 12:29:19

• 老相好终于回来学习了！我没明白 -非文学青年- ♀ (53 bytes) () 09/13/2011 postreply 13:52:12

• 不是，是课堂练习，老师出的题目让我们5分钟写好的练习。随便写一个地方，介绍给朋友。 -i999- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/13/2011 postreply 15:09:37

• 向文班的御用的999保安大人问好。一出场就有好东西给我们。 -bingli- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/13/2011 postreply 13:58:21

• 我替我主子给您请安！ -i999- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/13/2011 postreply 15:10:07

• 欢迎99回来！你咋总这么humble呢。别把你的老相好宠坏了。 -beautifulwind- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/13/2011 postreply 19:15:24

• 她就是这么贫。唉，她刚回来就跟我请假说要走一阵了，555，有点儿事要忙半月。 -非文学青年- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/13/2011 postreply 19:44:25

• 她干啥事为什么像小千一样这么focus啊，上来露个面也就是一分钟的事。 -beautifulwind- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/13/2011 postreply 19:47:01

• 老相好终于回来了。问好。 -EnLearner- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/13/2011 postreply 19:07:26

• 写的真好。 期待你以后多写一点德国～ -jennea- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/13/2011 postreply 20:34:28

• Why is the tense changing between stroll...felt...? -冲浪潜水员- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/14/2011 postreply 03:52:22