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冒昧大虾帮忙，急用，无限感激
张x丽
早年毕业于中国人民大学绘画及广告设计，后到美国州伯克利学院深造。从事艺术教育工作至今已有十七年，并于工余时间作多媒介创作及近年研习油画。作品多以描绘生活的历验，舒发喜，怒，哀，乐的感受和梦想追寻。
Graduated from Professional Studies of Renmin University of China, major in Graphic Design, Later, she moved to US and continuing study at Berkeley College. She work in Aesthetic Education and Art Creation Teaching & Learning for more than 17 years and continuing shows the way and strategies for the enforcement of artistic education. Besides teacher, miss Zhang commits herself to oil paintings and on Advertising creation, also probed into the idea of multimedia creation and has many remarkable outcome. Her most works of excellence was in the experience of living, express the thoughts and feelings. The joys and sorrows of the common people are her themes.
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我给您的修改如下：
Miss Zhang graduated from People’s University of China, majoring in graphics design and advertising. Later on, she attended Berkeley College where she studied contemporary art. She has worked with Aesthetic Education and Art Creation Teaching and Learning for more than 17 years, and she continues to show enthusiasm in her job. Outside of being a teacher, Zhang really enjoys oil painting and multimedia graphics design. Her work is most memorable for their realistic portrayals of life. Zhang captures both the joys and sorrows of her subjects wonderfully as well as expression, captivating everyone that has seen her paintings.
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冒昧大虾帮忙，急用，无限感激
张x丽
早年毕业于中国人民大学绘画及广告设计，后到美国州伯克利学院深造。从事艺术教育工作至今已有十七年，并于工余时间作多媒介创作及近年研习油画。作品多以描绘生活的历验，舒发喜，怒，哀，乐的感受和梦想追寻。
Graduated from Professional Studies of Renmin University of China, major in Graphic Design, Later, she moved to US and continuing study at Berkeley College. She work in Aesthetic Education and Art Creation Teaching & Learning for more than 17 years and continuing shows the way and strategies for the enforcement of artistic education. Besides teacher, miss Zhang commits herself to oil paintings and on Advertising creation, also probed into the idea of multimedia creation and has many remarkable outcome. Her most works of excellence was in the experience of living, express the thoughts and feelings. The joys and sorrows of the common people are her themes.
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我给您的修改如下：
Miss Zhang graduated from People’s University of China, majoring in graphics design and advertising. Later on, she attended Berkeley College where she studied contemporary art. She has worked with Aesthetic Education and Art Creation Teaching and Learning for more than 17 years, and she continues to show enthusiasm in her job. Outside of being a teacher, Zhang really enjoys oil painting and multimedia graphics design. Her work is most memorable for their realistic portrayals of life. Zhang captures both the joys and sorrows of her subjects wonderfully as well as expression, captivating everyone that has seen her paintings.
Re: 您的翻译不符合美国式表达。如果你认为我的版本可行，那么请买一箱青岛啤酒给我吧。如果你认为我的版本不行，那么请关公的狗头铡侍候我吧！呵呵。
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