nice reading, too long to listen all more than 3 times

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check following words:
1. tension
2.religious
3. morning (you seems didn't fully pronounced [or], aslo mellowing]
4. "plays" sounds odd on [s]

In general, your voice fell off at the end, so the important content words drfited off (went away, growth and decay, etc). Also, some vowls are not prolonged enough (procession, etc)
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