nice reading, too long to listen all more than 3 times
check following words:
1. tension
2.religious
3. morning (you seems didn't fully pronounced [or], aslo mellowing]
4. "plays" sounds odd on [s]
In general, your voice fell off at the end, so the important content words drfited off (went away, growth and decay, etc). Also, some vowls are not prolonged enough (procession, etc)
1. tension
2.religious
3. morning (you seems didn't fully pronounced [or], aslo mellowing]
4. "plays" sounds odd on [s]
In general, your voice fell off at the end, so the important content words drfited off (went away, growth and decay, etc). Also, some vowls are not prolonged enough (procession, etc)