My picks

"everything" , keep the first e short
"control", "tr" sound strange
"number" sounds like "namber"
"unimportant" "an eye" "an unforeseen" "on a big scale", should all combine the "n" with the vowel following it. e.g. "an eye" should sound like "a neye"
"prelude", the accent should be at the beginning, on "p"
"Sydney", d was over-emphasized.
"immediately" sound like "immedia l tely"
"hundreds" sound like "handreds"
"behind" sound like "behand"

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• self同鞋, 您还让人过不过周末了? :） -lilac09- ♀ (1140 bytes) () 09/12/2009 postreply 17:21:24

• Much better. That brings out another point -selfselfself- ♂ (726 bytes) () 09/12/2009 postreply 20:04:26

• self同鞋, 俺来discuss, discuss -lilac09- ♀ (1562 bytes) () 09/12/2009 postreply 20:59:08

• Don't quite agree, but -selfselfself- ♂ (301 bytes) () 09/12/2009 postreply 21:15:54

• 回复：Don't quite agree, but -lilac09- ♀ (679 bytes) () 09/12/2009 postreply 22:05:19

• 我的体会 -马奎- ♂ (334 bytes) () 09/13/2009 postreply 07:26:30

• See. We have a witness of the benefits of NCE reading. -lilac09- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/13/2009 postreply 13:45:15