Great. But there is room for improvement

来源: 非文学青年 于 2013-03-13 12:18:39 [] [博客] [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 本文已被阅读： 次 (481 bytes)
回答: Katie Couric The Best Advice I Ever Got, Part 10 由 2msmom 于 2013-03-13 08:02:31

In addition to Xiaoman's:

"keep" in the first sentence is too short.curl up sounds like curled up.

These are questions: these sounds like this

Personal history's stress seems off. It seems to me it should be on "history", yours seems to be on "Per", not completely sure.

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• 谢谢文青! 又回去听了一遍原版,你讲的对,我的Per(sonal) 太重,原版的Personal 和 -2msmom- ♀ 给 2msmom 发送悄悄话 (33 bytes) () 03/15/2013 postreply 17:41:55

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