• good ears, xiaoman -非文学青年- ♀ (115 bytes) () 03/13/2013 postreply 12:03:22
• 多谢楼上二位(小曼,文青)帮忙指正! -2msmom- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/15/2013 postreply 17:33:48
• Great. But there is room for improvement -非文学青年- ♀ (481 bytes) () 03/13/2013 postreply 12:18:39
• 谢谢文青! 又回去听了一遍原版,你讲的对,我的Per(sonal) 太重,原版的Personal 和 -2msmom- ♀ (33 bytes) () 03/15/2013 postreply 17:41:55
• very good reading! -~叶子~- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/15/2013 postreply 16:08:11
• 谢谢~叶子~! -2msmom- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/15/2013 postreply 17:44:19