Great writing, even the prescription sounds expensive:)

Lilac is surely 第一写手! Very productive.

P.S. A few sentences read redundant. Will discuss them later.

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• 谢谢~请大师不吝赐教,罗嗦是俺的第一毛病,句子结构一直是俺的弱项，还有语病 -lilac09- ♀ (10 bytes) () 08/23/2010 postreply 11:23:42

• Perfect practice makes perfect. -- Bruce Lee -carpediem- ♂ (1711 bytes) () 08/23/2010 postreply 14:00:47

• 大师指教的对,十分感谢~~ -lilac09- ♀ (2045 bytes) () 08/23/2010 postreply 14:39:51

• Your modesty impressed me. Did you see Slaving part? -carpediem- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/23/2010 postreply 15:15:41

• Yes. Bear picked that out too.~ -lilac09- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/23/2010 postreply 15:42:27