Pure Heart, Never Pretentious. 玉壶装不了清高

【七律】玉壶装不了清高

 

玉壶装不了清高，雪化冰心也未消。

白发红梅争雪色，苍浪碧水逐江潮。

梦中爱意真惆怅，寒处诗情最寂寥。

笔落歌成随雁阵，行行字字上青霄。

 

Pure Heart, Never Pretentious

 

A pure heart can be seen through the chest

that is like a transparent pot, never pretentious.

 

Outside, snow melts away.

Inside, the heart, clear as ice, will stay.

 

The white-haired, the red-flowered,

all are as innocent as the snow.

 

The white waves, the green waves,

chase each other, make the tide.

 

A longing for love in the dreams

yields real melancholy.

 

A passion for poetry on the heights

is the most lonely.

 

I pen down this poem hastily,

give the lines to a wild geese formation.

 

Line by line, word by word,

they shoot up into the blue sky.

 

 

此诗是读了诗坛数位诗友同韵唱和的佳作后获得灵感而写。诗友们的佳作在下面的链接里。

https://bbs.wenxuecity.com/poetry/923512.html

 

(© January 31, 2024, godog)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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• 笔落歌成随雁阵，行行字字上青霄。尾联漂亮！ -盈盈一笑间- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/01/2024 postreply 08:55:48

• A passion for poetry on the heights is the most lonely. -盈盈一笑间- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/01/2024 postreply 08:56:36

• 谢谢盈盈摘句鼓励 -godog- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/01/2024 postreply 16:21:33

• G-兄英文望尘莫及。赞！ -方外居士- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/01/2024 postreply 09:01:22

• 方外兄过誉了，谢谢谬赞 -godog- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/01/2024 postreply 16:22:28

• +100086，Go兄的中文古诗词更是让人望尘莫及。赞！ -暖冬cool夏- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/01/2024 postreply 17:54:39

• A poem dream of pretty picturesque with different strokes -妖妖灵- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/01/2024 postreply 09:02:13

• This comment is spot on. ：） -盈盈一笑间- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/01/2024 postreply 09:24:26

• 果酱：）我都不确定是不是有语法错误：） -妖妖灵- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/01/2024 postreply 14:03:14

• Your expression is poetic so no need to worry grammar:) -godog- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/01/2024 postreply 16:23:52

• 赞 寒处诗情最寂寥! -moonlight7- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/01/2024 postreply 11:02:42

• 谢谢鼓励！ -godog- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/01/2024 postreply 16:24:18

• 学习了！ -康赛欧- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/01/2024 postreply 16:51:33