My Father and I Shine Together Like the Sun and the Moon

My Father and I Shine Together Like the Sun and the Moon

When my father was here
He was the sun
I was the moon in his hand

When my father is gone
He is the moon
I am the sun in his dream

我和父亲日月同辉

父亲在的时候
他是太阳
我是他手里的月亮

父亲走了之后
他是月亮
我是他梦里的太阳

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• 试译我的小诗《我和父亲日月同辉》，抛砖引玉，欢迎更多的版本，谢谢。 -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/23/2022 postreply 10:06:53

• The moon shines since it is kissed by the sun -移花接木- ♂ (280 bytes) () 06/23/2022 postreply 13:41:38

• Thank you for your beautiful and kind words. -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/23/2022 postreply 21:27:40

• 时态运用得好清楚～ 再次感叹主语宾语的巧妙转换。 -妖妖灵- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/23/2022 postreply 14:22:42

• 再次谢灵灵。 -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/23/2022 postreply 21:31:29

• 恭喜小7。首页进来，谢谢网管，My Father and I Shine Together Like the Sun推荐 -梅雨潭- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/23/2022 postreply 17:43:23

• 多谢梅雨潭版主。 -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/23/2022 postreply 21:34:05

• a good idea -忒忒绿- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/25/2022 postreply 12:06:00

• Thank you. -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/25/2022 postreply 21:51:26

• 点赞。很棒。 -chuntianle- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/27/2022 postreply 09:18:16

• 谢谢。 -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/29/2022 postreply 08:36:00

• 构思巧妙！ -天玉之- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/27/2022 postreply 11:02:56

• 谢谢鼓励。 -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/29/2022 postreply 08:36:28