There are some typos:
While our whole family sitting around the .... were/was sitting
bitten egg > beaten eggs
after been seasoned > after being seasoned (coated)
There are some typos:
While our whole family sitting around the .... were/was sitting
bitten egg > beaten eggs
after been seasoned > after being seasoned (coated)
• Great! Thank you so much for proof reading my writing, Rancho. -念亲- ♀ (177 bytes) () 02/10/2016 postreply 09:08:06
• Oops, proofreading should be one word. -念亲- ♀ (3242 bytes) () 02/10/2016 postreply 20:38:50