谢谢点评！

所讲的有理， 切中利害。

Whatever is fickle, freckled (who knows how?)
不管是多变的， 多斑的（谁知为何）？
意见：Whatever is fickle是否是分句，freckled是主句，译文是否应该把这主次表达出来？

You are right! I will make change later.

I will digest the rest.

This is a little poem but it is difficult to translate.  It is also interesting.  I will continue working on it.

Thank again.