凑个热闹，也译《银河碎了》

银河碎了

 

虔谦

 

有一条路

叫做回不去

我一步三回首

看见你还站在路的的那一头

那个仲夏夜里你的琅琅笑语

化入了那知时节的雁鸣声声

银河碎了

碎成满天欲滴的寒星 

 

The Shattered Milky Way

 

There is a road, 

No retrace back, that's called.

Walking on it, I keep looking back 

And see you are still on the other end.

That midsummer night's laughs of yours;

Now the honks of the migrating geese,

That shatter the Milk Way

Into the skyful of drooping, cold stars.

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• 真棒 -李唐- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/20/2015 postreply 14:13:58

• 谢谢，你的译文也很好。 -聚曦亭- ♀ (6 bytes) () 02/20/2015 postreply 14:17:30

• 谢谢聚曦亭分享美诗佳译,春节快乐! -南山松- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/21/2015 postreply 05:44:26

• 译得真好，谢谢聚曦亭分享，并祝春节快乐。 -斯葭- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/23/2015 postreply 11:12:05