试译虔谦的《冬林心语》

冬林心语

虔谦

冬末的早晨 
暖阳出来了
树林的哪里
传来劈里啪啦的声音
是松蕾剥裂了
还是鸟雏出了壳
是蛇缠住了它的猎物
还是新芽出了土 …...

四周静极了
只有那执著的声音
不时响起
一团雪掉下来
落在了我的脚盘上
我低下头来
听到了心底
一朵花绽放的声响


The Heartfelt Murmur in a Winter Wood

Written by Qianqian

Translated by Ju xiting

It's a late winter morning,
When a balmy sun is rising;
From somewhere in the wood,
Wafts over some crackling.
Is a pine bud cracking
Or a baby bird hatching?
Is a snake squeezing its prey
Or out of earth is a sprout burgeoning...?
 
It's so quiet all around, 
But only that persistant sound
Is fitfully heard to resound.
Here a snow lump thumps down
Right onto my foot;
Lowering my head,
I hear in my heart,
A flower bursts open aloud.

所有跟帖： 

• 好诗 ！好译！ -niteBynite- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/15/2015 postreply 16:43:17

• 合一个，也很喜欢虔谦的作品 -niteBynite- ♀ (1255 bytes) () 02/15/2015 postreply 16:51:08

• 特喜欢最后一句诗眼：一朵花绽放的声响 -聚曦亭- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/15/2015 postreply 17:34:49

• 收藏了，感谢聚曦亭！也谢谢 niteBynite 和小曼，贺新春！ -虔谦- ♀ (69 bytes) () 02/16/2015 postreply 20:15:21

• 真喜欢，佩服你的诗歌造诣和英文能力！再次感谢！ -虔谦- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/16/2015 postreply 20:19:34

• 译得很棒！　 -~叶子~- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/17/2015 postreply 23:39:20

• 谢谢赞赏！ -聚曦亭- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/18/2015 postreply 08:20:27

• 译得真好，谢分享，并祝聚曦亭春节快乐。 -斯葭- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/19/2015 postreply 19:52:27

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