莎士比亚《Venus and Adonis》翻译 - 187

'Had I been tooth'd like him, I must confess,

With kissing him I should have kill'd him first;

But he is dead, and never did he bless

My youth with his; the more am I accurst.'

With this, she falleth in the place she stood,

And stains her face with his congealed blood.

“我若有齿钢如彘，

  张口一吻定杀男；

  情男之死已成是，

  青春不佑命使然”

  神女言毕坠原地，

  血染脸颊凝面际。

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• 大侠辛苦努力！我现在明白这是叙事的诗，跟我也在辛苦学习的很不一样。 -淘金客- ♂ (121 bytes) () 04/09/2013 postreply 18:30:21

• 两者不能比。 -bmdn- ♀ (130 bytes) () 04/09/2013 postreply 19:36:24

• 比一比，也有好处， 我还没机会细察。 -淘金客- ♂ (73 bytes) () 04/12/2013 postreply 11:12:38

• 这么长谁背呀。能像模像样朗诵就不错了：） -淘金客- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/12/2013 postreply 11:14:37