回复：正好有点时间，试译《出塞》（唐）王之渙， 修改了一个字

出塞（唐）王之渙

黃河遠上白雲間﹐

一片孤城千仞山。

羌笛何須怨楊柳﹐

春風不度玉門關。

The Yellow River crawls far into the clouds in white, 

A lone town lies below a mountain in sky height.   

Why moan the willow song through your flute so heart-break,

Since no spring breeze ever favors Yumen Pass of might.

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• heart-breaking instead ; ) -tingfeng- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/13/2012 postreply 15:20:30

• 正确，谢谢，就是打乱了每行12音节的音节数，或许把heart-break改成grieving好些。 -聚曦亭- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/14/2012 postreply 07:01:18

• 其实我不懂音律,见笑了! -tingfeng- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/14/2012 postreply 15:42:45