1) While been asked if he knew Ms A before the accident, Mr Robert denied.
是否可以改为:When asked if he knew Ms. A before the accident, Mr. Robert answered "No."
说明:“Deny”什么?是问题?问题是用不着“deny"的。
2) Mr Robert claimed he did not meet Ms A on 2 July 2011.
是否可改为:Mr. Robert claimed that he did not know Ms. A until July 2,2011.
说明:没有前文,不知道是不是改句的意思。