莎士比亚《Venus and Adonis》翻译 - 001

EVEN as the sun with purple-colour'd face

Had ta'en his last leave of the weeping morn,

Rose-cheek'd Adonis hied him to the chase;

Hunting he loved, but love he laugh'd to scorn;

Sick-thoughted Venus makes amain unto him,

And like a bold-faced suitor 'gins to woo him.

 

恰值朝时紫日暹，
仅剩晨露已消凝，
红颊急骋美少年；
独喜狩猎不钟情；
幽情神女施魔念，
求朗廉寡耻少见。

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• 好！“朗”应该是“郎”吧。 -聚曦亭- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/22/2012 postreply 18:27:45

• 回复：自认仔细，还是出错了。谢了。 -bmdn- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/22/2012 postreply 18:40:22

• DN老师我现在在烈日下上网你文章好些字我都木有看得懂。回头再学习。 -sportwoman- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/23/2012 postreply 05:53:10