请批改我的”鹦鹉学舌作业“

真诚地希望您指出我需要改进的地方， 谢谢！     

Here are the lines.

From the dentist

Lesson One
Schools and Education
Basic patterns
1.    What college should I attend in the fall?
2.    I’m majoring in history.  
3.    Can you tell me where is the dormitory?
4.    I’m taking extra classes this semester.
5.    Are you having problems with chemistry?
6.    I’m not worried about this test.
7.    The prices of textbooks have gone up.
8.    Our class has a meeting after lunch.
9.    The new professor is very strict.
10.    Do you want to study together for the exam?

所有跟帖： 

• 模仿得很好啊 -全国牙防组- ♂ (309 bytes) () 11/13/2010 postreply 15:20:32

• 谢谢牙医的金耳朵，以后一定注意这些问题 -AspenL- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/13/2010 postreply 15:41:18

• 朗读原文：鹦鹉学舌作业 来源: 全国牙防组 -紫君- ♀ (1736 bytes) () 11/13/2010 postreply 19:45:43

• 回复：朗读原文：鹦鹉学舌作业 来源: 全国牙防组 -AspenL- ♂ (76 bytes) () 11/13/2010 postreply 20:04:50

• 欢迎新同学！ :) -千与.千寻- ♀ (342 bytes) () 11/14/2010 postreply 08:29:35

• 哎呀！ 简直对极了。我就是搞不定， “l" 和 "r", 还有 “l" 和"n” 。 谢谢你号的脉。 -AspenL- ♂ (109 bytes) () 11/14/2010 postreply 10:07:51

• AspenL's声音太小拉. -亦冬- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/14/2010 postreply 18:32:06

• 就这音量，已经是壮着胆子学舌的成就了。下次改进。一定。 -AspenL- ♂ (61 bytes) () 11/14/2010 postreply 18:41:13

• your voice sounds like my american neighbor! very good -梅石莹玉- ♀ (18 bytes) () 11/15/2010 postreply 16:30:39

• 谢谢鼓励。 在这里潜水很长时间了，很熟悉你的论坛号。好象老外经常用term 代替... -AspenL- ♂ (139 bytes) () 11/15/2010 postreply 18:37:23